Poetry
Returning: Hank Lazer’s field recordings of mind in morning

field recordings of mind in morning
(BlazeVOX, 2021)
Often I am permitted to return to a meadow
as if it were a given property of the mind
that certain bounds hold against chaos,
that is a place of first permission,
everlasting omen of what is.
–Robert Duncan
if that awakening can be carried into the day
if it is as a lantern or candle held in the hand
if the eyes bear witness to the slow
unfolding the subtle caressing of first light
across the hillside & into the pasture
if often i am permitted to return to a meadow
if the light is the light of mind
& the lantern is the word itself first light & first word
quiet & present as the pasture itself
–Hank Lazer
For Robert Duncan and Hank Lazer, the price of permission to the loved place with its quotidian miracles is a commitment to particulars, to deep awareness, and to gratitude.
The meadow must be of the mind. No matter how physical the meadow is, leaving its heavy morning dew on the boots that tread there, it always unfolds itself in the mind or nowhere at all.
Hank Lazer’s remarkable new poetry collection, field recordings of mind in morning, is a sequence of chants rung upon the constants and the changes of his returns to a place that offers solace and restoration. Even the few lines quoted above reveal many of the key elements that recur throughout Lazer’s series: “awakening,” “hand,” eyes,” “light,” “hillside,” “mind,” “word,” “quiet,” and “present.” Then, there are “way,” “thinking,” “writing,” “three brown dogs,” “being,” “moment,” “time,” “walking”; and this list is still partial.
In the afterword/notes to the collection, Lazer explains:
Carrollton (Alabama) and Duncan Farm are synonymous: sometimes I use one name, sometimes the other. Duncan Farm …is the 200 acres farm that my wife and I inherited a few years ago…Over the past several years, the farm has increasingly become a key place for my meditation, reading, writing, photography, and observation – all most especially in the early morning.”
Field recordings is part of an ongoing exploration of the similarities of meditation (zazen) and the writing of a kind of spontaneous, improvisatory, immediate poetry – a writing of the moment, a series of transcriptions (or recordings) of specific instances of (morning) consciousness.
In order to provide a potential reader with as clear a sense as possible of Lazer’s central strategy of balancing returns and repetitions with differences and variations, a method that is based on the wonderful paradox that is at the heart of the entire collection.
i live in the present moment of my reading
i live in the present moment of my writing
So, turning from one poem to the next, a reader can fully expect to encounter words and phrases that are repeated. “All art is made, I think, out of recurrence. The point is to have recurrence so that it isn’t mere repetition…The idea is to have these recurrences so that they will always turn up as new…” (Louis Zukofsky) To his great credit, this is what Lazer accomplishes. Each new morning brings delights that are radiantly different since they are re-lighted by the sun of that particular day.
whether the quiet morning
felt like repetition
or the miracle that
it truly is in
its unique particularity”
substance singing
particulars
various turns
of the infinite pathways
of change
Writing occurs which is in the detail, not mirage, of seeing, of thinking with the things as they exist, and of directing them along a line of melody.” (Zukofsky) Things of the world are perceived by the senses, conveyed to the mind, and made into music by a movement that must include, ultimately, the hand.
thinking
becomes
writing
emerges
one or two
small gestures
at a time
of thinking
in transit
through the hand
intricate nerves ligaments &
muscles of this illuminated
hand as its writing
opens up
into the light
& the specific
prospects possible
in the invisible body
of an exact music
it is happening right now
appearing & disappearing as these words
through this hand become
an instance of time
i moved aside
to let them arrive
the sudden
pulse of words
As day turns to new day, of course, each person cannot evade being in mourning, Lazer reminds the reader.
of course
living now
must be
elegiac
what river or
way we move upon
by grace of this
slowly aging boat
this decomposing body
now who was
my father
to say star matter
may be true
but it doesn’t
touch the strangeness
of time
& the painful
beauty of
being here
& moments of knowing
exactly
what is happening
not so much
attention to
the dying hand or
the integrity
of the gesture
but a quality
of attention
learned from
the page
that continues
everywhere else
Notably, Lazer, Duncan, and Zukofsky have all acknowledged the phenomenon of relationship, communality among artists across the spectrum of time. They firmly believe that any artist who creates without this awareness is necessarily adrift. One should not read Lazer’s sequence without recognizing his kinship with William Carlos Williams.
so much
depends upon
it all hangs
in the balance
so much so
time of these words
making a place & it all
depends upon your
being here really being
here
three dogs
at rest beside
the writing desk
glazed with rain
water beside the black & white
cows in the green pasture
so that time
is a light
you can de
pend on
or
if given
the time to
or being in
the time of
as thinking is
a way of
being
in time
One could even argue that this stanza looks forward in time to Lazer’s mind and to this present collection:
as love
newborn
each day upon the twig
which may die
springs your love
fresh up
lusty for the sun
the bird’s companion”
–from “Primavera,” WC Williams
A close listening to the musical collaboration between Lazer and Holland Hopson—also entitled field recordings of mind in morning and available online from bandcamp.com—will genuinely enhance anyone’s appreciation of the textual collection. Fifteen of the book’s poems are performed in an improvisatory manner, with Lazer reading and often rereading lines as Hopson accompanies with his banjo that creates a sound like an uncanny melding of Appalachia and Japan.
So—
“I mean either you show that you’re alive in this world, in making something, or you’re not.”
–Zukofsky
an arduous practice
that becomes over
years a tunneling
through & back
to the enigmatic
richness of this
moment
,,,these few words
eyes to mind to heart
yes yes let us
take it all to heart